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Julie Suk Award for Poetry finalist 

15 Bytes (magazine)  Book Award (poetry) finalist

New England Poetry Club's Sheila Margaret Motton Prize finalist 

Rain intermits, bus windows steam up, loved ones suffer from dementia鈥攊n the constantly shifting, metaphoric world of Tremulous Hinge, figures struggle to remain standing and speaking against forces of gravity, time, and language. In these visually porous poems, boundaries waver and reconfigure along the rumbling shoreline of Rockaway or during the intermediary hours that an insomniac undergoes between darkness and dawn. Through a series of self-portraits, elegies, and Eros-tinged meditations, this hovering never subsides but offers, among the fragments, momentary constellations: 鈥渕oths all swarming the / same light bulb.鈥

From the difficulties of stuttering to teetering attempts at love, from struggling to order a hamburger to tracing the deckled edge of a hydrangea, these poems tumble and hum, revealing a hinge between word and world. Ultimately, among lofting waves, collapsing hands, and darkening skies, words themselves鈥攁 stutterer's maneuvers through speech, a deceased grandfather鈥檚 use of punctuation鈥攂ecome forms of consolation. From its initial turbulence to its final surprising solace, this debut collection mesmerizes. 

鈥淕iannelli鈥檚 debut is a quiet affair, but its simplicity masks layers and a longing for precision exhibited through minute adjustments, tweaked phrases, and shifting imagery. This striving for fluency could have been born from the childhood speech impediment the poet reflects on poignantly in the opening poem: 鈥渟ince I can鈥檛 say everlasting/ I say every/ lost thing.鈥 At the same time, Giannelli is preoccupied with double meanings. In 鈥淪tar Gazers,鈥 鈥渨e鈥 look out at the stars, but they are looking right back at us. Metaphors are applied and swapped out, as in 鈥淗ydrangea,鈥 where the flower is a snow cone, a 鈥淏earded lady,// balloon man, chameleon,鈥 鈥渉oneycomb/ and bouquet,鈥 鈥渧iscous muscle,鈥 and more. He contends with the limits of clarity using some quite brilliant anagrams and homonyms, as in 鈥減arents in the train window winnowed to transparence.鈥 Sometimes Giannelli seems to pull stunning phrases whole from the ether, describing the tides as 鈥渢he ocean tearing blue page after/ blue page from its journal.鈥 He also explores grief through a document written by a deceased grandfather, its perplexities perhaps easier to contend with than those of life itself. Though perfect expression may be unattainable, poetry is often about the process, and it is a pleasure to watch Giannelli work (and rework) his magic.鈥濃攕tarred review, Publishers Weekly
鈥淭his extraordinary and sobering debut begins with a literal stutter鈥斺楽ince I couldn't say tomorrow / I said Wednesday.鈥 In trade for this impediment, Adam Giannelli finds that, in poetry, what can鈥檛 be said gives way to what must be said.鈥濃擟raig Morgan Teicher, judge, 海角乱伦社区Poetry Prize
鈥淎dam Giannelli talks to the world鈥攖o rain, to insomnia, to the beloveds here and vanished, to the stars themselves in their 鈥榦ld staring contest.鈥 Sink into this book as into solace and trouble. 鈥楢m I lost / or have I been lifted?鈥 the poet asks. Answer: happily for us, both.鈥濃擬arianne Boruch, author, Eventually One Dreams the Real Thing
鈥淩ilke meets Roethke in the beveled moptops of a hydrangea, a basketball net鈥檚 鈥榩unctured sieve,鈥 a rogue porcupine (鈥榪uilled, in dark makeup, like the bass player / in an 80s band鈥), all transformed, in Giannelli鈥檚 scrupulous, sonically lavish articulation, into emblems of the unspeakable mystery inside every syllable. Inside us.鈥濃擫isa Russ Spaar, author, Orexia: Poems
鈥淚n this stunning debut collection, the observations of an often-solitary speaker explode in dazzling metaphors, unexpected juxtapositions, and challenging insights. Elegy becomes explicit as the book progresses, met in the final sections by poems of relationship. But the note of loss remains: 鈥榃hat we鈥檝e lost swims / under the surface of mirrors鈥欌攁nd in these extraordinary poems.鈥濃擬artha Collins, author, Admit One: An American Scrapbook

鈥沦迟耻迟迟别谤鈥

since I couldn鈥檛 say tomorrow

I said Wednesday

 

since I couldn鈥檛 say Cleveland I said

Ohio

since I couldn鈥檛 say hello

 

I hung up

since I couldn鈥檛 say burger

 

a waitress finished

my sentence

 

a green-striped mint

dissolved

 

on my tongue

from peacock to dove

2016 海角乱伦社区Poetry Prize

2017 Julie Suk Award, Finalist

2018 Finalist for Utah's 15 Bytes Book Award for Poetry

2018 Finalist for the New England Poetry Club's Sheila Margaret Motton Prize

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Publication Date
04/25/2017
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1st